DAY 3:  

~ I'm a great believer that any tool that enhances communication has profound effects in terms of how people can learn from each other, and how they can achieve the kind of freedoms that they're interested in. ~

Quote of the Day stated by Bill Gates

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THEME:  "A DAY OF  REVISING  AND EDITING”

Day 3

Introductory Activity: Go to http://www.angelfire.com/wi/writingprocess/  and review the revising stage of the writing process.
 

  1. Open the file named bginitialessay.

  2. Immediately, save this file as billgates_revisedessay.

  3. Revise your first draft of your writing according to your knowledge of revising.

  4. Print the document and then continue the editing process.

  5. Re-read the printed hard copy and you will also edit and revise your writing as needed.

  6. Print a copy of your essay you revised today for the teacher to proofread (Your content of your essay will also be graded at this time).

  7. Begin your formatting your essay, complete the Telephone Etiquette word-processing activity located at the link below. http://www.quia.com/files/quia/users/reynardj/telephone_etiquette_word-processing-activity.docx

This activity prepares your for theme day called, A DAY OF FORMATTING.

HOW CAN BILL GATES YOUNG BEGINNINGS  MOTIVATE YOU TO DREAM BIG? 

Day 1:     Day of Organizing Thoughts! DAY 2:  DAY OF COMPOSING!

             DAY 3:  DAY OF REVISING THOUGHTS!

DAY 4: DAY OF PEER EDITING!
DAY 5: DAY OF FINALIZING!   

Jessica Simmons, Lesson Designer

Updated February 1, 2010

email: jessica.simmons@hcps.org