| A | B |
| shirley Jackson | capitalization error |
| the teachers friend | singular possessive noun error |
| alot | spelling error |
| would of | usage error |
| sheduling | spelling error |
| The cards' were shuffled. | plural error |
| Tara and i are friends. | capitalization error |
| She said, don't do it. | quotation marks needed |
| The boy said that he was tired. | no error |
| The short story, Charles, . . | missing quotation marks |
| would've | no error |
| In the begging of the story | spelling error |
| These are the reasons | clincher error |
| Coming home from school. | fragment error |
| Thomas Jefferson middle school | capitalization error |
| The Fall is my favorite season. | capitalization error |
| Loch is a cool book. | title error |
| She should of known the answer. | usage error |
| I did'nt know. | apostrophe error |
| Why are you late. | punctuation error |