| A | B |
| Incorrect: to United States | Correct: to the United States |
| Incorrect: leetle | Correct: little |
| Incorrect: The reasons is | Correct: The reasons are |
| Incorrect: My eye was out | Correct: My eye was damaged or hurt |
| Incorrect: with that kind of fractures | Correct: with those kinds of fractures |
| Incorrect: accepted to help me; accepted=receiving a present or possession | Correct: agreed to help me; agreed=to take on |
| Incorrect: paid me for my eye | Correct: paid for the damage to my eye |
| Incorrect: so anxious of recovering my sight | Correct: so anxious to recover my sight |
| many ums/ahs | Pause! Think before speaking. |
| Incorrect: This bone was descended. | Correct: This bone had descended. |
| Incorrect: I took the decision. | Correct: I made the decision. |
| Incorrect: Den I | Correct: Then I |
| Incorrect: came to student | Correct: became a student/came to study |
| Incorrect: was offered to work | Correct: was offered work |
| Incorrect: from the deep (adjective) of my heart | Correct: from the depth (noun) of my heart |