| A | B |
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| We went to the party and ate fruits candies and cookies. | We went to the party and ate fruits, candies, and cookies. |
| Mrs. Hansen where is my study guide? | Mrs. Hansen, where is my study guide for the Chapter 14 Test tomorrow? |
| The cookie shop is located at 456 East Washington Street Marshall Texas. | The cookie shop is located at 456 East Washington Street, Marshall, Texas. |
| The guys went to Lego Land and they each bought a new set of legos. | The guys went to Lego Land, and they each bought a new set of legos. |
| I love to eat meat loaf and mashed potatoes. | no change |
| We counted 3002 lights on the Christmas tree. | We counted 3,002 lights on the Christmas tree. |
| The girls went to the mall to get a soda however the store was closed when they arrived. | The girls went to the mall to get a soda, however, the store was closed when they arrived. |
| When the dog went outside he started digging a hole under the fence. | When the dog went outside, he started digging a hole under the fence. |
| My best friend Julie gave me a book for Christmas. | My best friend, Julie, gave me a book for Christmas. |
| Mrs. Nyquist said "Please clean up your area before recess." | Mrs. Nyquist said, "Please clean up your area before recess." |
| For Halloween I had to decide if I wanted to be a dinosaur a witch or a race car driver. | For Halloween, I had to decide if I wanted to be a dinosaur, a witch, or a race car driver. |
| My cat went to the vet but she didn't have to get any shots. | My cat went to the vet, but she didn't have to get any shots. |
| Mrs. Morell our math teacher gave us a review to study for Thursday's test. | Mrs. Morell, our math teacher, gave us a review to study for Thursday's test. |
| I love to read books and sleep late on the weekends. | no change |
| After we finish our tests this week we get to relax on Friday. | After we finish our tests this week, we get to relax on Friday. |
