| A | B |
|---|
| most effective revision | Which change is the best? |
| provide support | Add additional details of the main idea or sentence |
| most effective transition | change between one sentence and another |
| closing sentence is weak | improve the closing sentence |
| revise sentence ... so that it more clearly states the position | Make the sentence more clear about what the author is talking about |
| left an important detail | important information is missing |
| extraneous sentence | a sentence not needed with extra information possibly off topic |
| more effective topic sentence | which sentence is a better main idea |
| The meaning of sentence ... can be clarified by changing | The meaning can be improved by ... |
| call to action | when an author tells the reader to do something |
