The Panyee Football Club: LITERARY ESSAY: Body Paragraph #2

Please look at the photos below.
Make sure you write your body paragraph #2 on paper to keep at home BEFORE you hit the SUBMIT ANSWERS button.
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  1. Here is my BODY PARAGRAPH #2 that I wrote....notice the following things:
    1)I indented
    2)My first sentence is my thesis statement about the boys with only one support ("...the boys were determined because they played in the semi-final and they were losing")
    3)Sentences 2, 3 and 4 are quotes/details from the video that PROVE the boys were determined because they were losing in the semi-final
    4)Sentences 5 and 6 are my own words/my own explanation of why I THINK they were determined when they were losing in the semi-final
    5)At first I noticed I was not able able to use one transitional phrase.... So in red ink I revised and found a place where I could add one: "after playing for sometime" is my transitional phrase-- this shows that a long period of time has passed



  1. Body paragraph #2 should ONLY be about your second support. My second support is about the boys losing in the semi final. Notice how I only talked about the semi final details in this paragraph. I got those details from the video.


  1. Link to PANYEE FOOTBALL CLUB video...you need to watch the video again to gather evidence/support
    Play audio


  1. Please write your body paragraph #2 in the big white box below.
    Add your name to the "NAME" box above.
    Hit "SUBMIT ANSWERS" button.





Ms. Gallegos
Grade 5 Teacher
Mount Sinai Middle School
NY