The Panyee Football Club: LITERARY ESSAY: Body Paragraph #3

Please look at the photos below.
Make sure you write your body paragraph #3 on paper to keep at home BEFORE you hit the SUBMIT ANSWERS button.
Name: 


  1. Here is my BODY PARAGRAPH #3 that I wrote....notice the following things:
    1)I indented
    2)My first sentence is my thesis statement about the boys with only one support ("...the boys were determined because they won third place in the tournament")
    3)Sentences 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, and 7 are quotes/details from the video that PROVE the boys were determined because they won third place in the tournament
    4)Sentence 8 is my own words/my own explanation of why I THINK they were determined when they won third place in the tournament
    5)I used "THEN" and "DURING" ... as transitional words to show that time has passed



  1. Body paragraph #3 should ONLY be about your third support. My third support is about the boys won third place in the tournament. Notice how I only talked about the boys playing in the tournament and winning third place. I got those details from the video.


  1. Link to PANYEE FOOTBALL CLUB video...you need to watch the video again to gather evidence/support
    Play audio


  1. Please write your body paragraph #3 in the big white box below.
    Add your name to the "NAME" box above.
    Hit "SUBMIT ANSWERS" button.





Ms. Gallegos
Grade 5 Teacher
Mount Sinai Middle School
NY