The Panyee Football Club: LITERARY ESSAY: Concluding Paragraph

Please look at the photos below.
Make sure you write your concluding paragraph on paper to keep at home BEFORE you hit the SUBMIT ANSWERS button.
Name: 


  1. Here is my CONCLUDING PARAGRAPH that I wrote....notice the following things:
    1)I indented
    2)My first sentence is my restatement with the title of the video and my claim that I have been using in every single body paragraph.("...the boys were determined ")
    3)Then I summed up an important part of the video. I repeated an important part of my introductory paragraph ("the boys lived on an island where space was limited and wanted to play soccer on the island and form a soccer team")
    4) Finally, I made it personal...I explained how I felt about the claim that the boys were determined....I want to make the reader think about their life and what is going on in the outside world at this time.



  1. Your concluding paragraph is summing up your entire essay...be powerful...be creative....make the reader think...make the reader want to be a better person and change something they don't like about themselves


  1. Link to PANYEE FOOTBALL CLUB video...you need to watch the video again to gather evidence/support
    Play audio


  1. Please write your concluding paragraph in the big white box below.
    Add your name to the "NAME" box above.
    Hit "SUBMIT ANSWERS" button.





Ms. Gallegos
Grade 5 Teacher
Mount Sinai Middle School
NY